Haon - gliding falconRyan B - golden lionIsaac E - sneaky dogMadeline - fast cheetahGeorgia - wrinkly elephantEmilia A - falling down
gliding falcon
thin wings
glide
like paper aeroplanes
sharp beak digs for worms
big eyes
stare
Haon, age 10, Te Parito Kōwhai Russley School
Golden Lion
copper eyes glowing
like the sun
thin whiskers
pointy like needles
soft mane
as messy as a gorse bush
Ryan B, age 11, Te Parito Kōwhai Russley School
Sneaky Dog
creeps silently
to the pantry to retrieve his bone
acting like he’s on a secret mission
Isaac E, Year 7, Te Parito Kōwhai Russley School
fast cheetah running
brown dots,
brown as chocolate
fur bristles,
gold as a sunflower
Madeline, age 10, Te Parito Kōwhai Russley School
wrinkly elephant
enormous ears
big as the titanic
wriggly trunk waves like seaweed
feet as round
as dinner plates
Georgia, age 10, Te Parito Kōwhai Russley School
Falling down
Gorgeous green now blinding brown
A sheet of leaves covers the land
like a blanket
Emilia A, Year 7, Te Parito Kōwhai Russley School
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