Tuesday 1 July 2014

Delicious Writing!

Today I challenged our writers to create a chocolate story. They were given an assortment of delectable confectionery and wrote a story including the names of chocolate bars. 

Here are some of the stories from the year 7 group:


There once was a girl on Mars. On Mars, the pixie girl was having a picnic in the Milky WayMars was filled with TNT. Suddenly there was an aftershock that made Mars blow up. And the fabulicious Mars was all curly. All of this happened because of the wicked witch. Then an apocalypse happened and all the pinky zombies started eating all the crunchie chocolate fish. Then the world started to fizzer up with Turkish people. Then the marvellous creations bounty-hunter twirled into a pool of flakes.


The pinky pixie caramel had a picnic with a chocolate fish on planet Mars while watching the Milky Way.

The curly wurly zombie chew used TNT to blow up a fizzey and it looked like after shocks

The crunchie twirl looked fabulicious.

The wicked whizz flake was a bounty's marvellous creation in the Turkish world.


Once there was a wicked witch. She liked twirling lightning. She had a pinky hat. She had curly wurly hair. She had a sidekick pixie called Twinklebell. A bounty-hunter teased the witch . He threw TNT at her house and made it blow up. She moved to a place by the sea and turned the fish into chocolate fish. The pixie had an after-shock but survived. They had a picnic to celebrate!





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