Showing posts with label Ava. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Ava. Show all posts

Wednesday, 21 August 2019

Ode to a Vegetable

What's an Ode?
An ode is a very old form of poetry. In ancient Greece, poets wrote odes to celebrate heroes, nations, ideas and nature. These days odes are more informal and are often funny. They can be any length, and rhymed or not. The ode is a poem of praise (a bit like a love letter!), addressed to a person, place, object or an idea.

We hope you enjoy the odes written during the writing workshop with author Belinda O'Keefe. Look out for the juicy language, alliteration, rhyme and similes.



Ode to a Lemon
by Hollie, age 10

Oh! You sweet sour glorious lemon.
When I rest I think of your zest.
I love the sourness and tastiness.
You’re as bright as the sun, my hun.
When people’s faces squirt
I take as an alert
there’s someone that does not like lemon
to them it must be venom.
I love it when I see you be put on my family’s fish
it has to be their absolute favourite dish.
Never fear lemon's here!


Ode to Corn
by Adrianna P, age 10

I love how your skin is like a yellow giraffe
your smooth soft texture drives me crazy.
Your taste is sweet and juicy

I love it when my Dad
puts you in hot water
and deep fries you!

I also like it when he puts you on my plate
then I eat you and feel
warm as an oven.

I love you, corn!


Ode to a Purple Kumara
by Ava

Oh! glorious kumara
your skin is like a fresh purple grape
you have a couple of roots
that look like your hair
you smell like an asteroid from outer space
you look like a purple little mouse
that always gets stuck in a house

I can mash you, roast you, and even burn you
we can grate you, hate you or even rate you
your texture is like a bumpy pink petal
floating down through the air

Do you like kumara?
Can you compare?
Because I like kumara and hopefully you like kumara too
So listen loud and clear
Please eat your vegetables, kumara and never fear
because kumara is here


Ode to Potato
by Hugo

Oh potato, you have spots on you
like the moon.

You’re as yellow as the sun,
spots as grey as stone.

You’re eaten mashed, fried,
but don’t forget fries.

On Thanksgiving you’d be perfect
with turkey.


Ode to a Cucumber
by William B

Oh! You beautiful vegetable
Your skin is as rough as the bark on a tree
You’re dark green, but light on the inside
It reminds me of the bright leaves in summer
Your crunch is as loud as the leaves in winter
the knife glides through you
like a soft loud or cotton candy
and as I take a bite
the only sound you hear is CRUNCH!


Ode to a Potato
Riley M

Oh! You luscious potato
You’re yellow as the sun on a cloudless day
Your thin skin
is as scarred as a stuntman

the mud is as brown as tree bark
dotted on you like a kid that fell
over in the field

Fried, roasted, baked, pretty much anything
I can eat you with everything I want

You taste like seasoned heaven
or flavoured life


Ode to a Pumpkin
by Payton, age 9yrs
The smooth sensation, the roundness of a soccer ball
oh how heavy
very heavy as a weight,
all the seeds, the bright orange
as bright as a light
oh the strong smell when it’s cooked.

But the smell, oh how revolting
as yuck as a pair of socks

BUT the awesome carvings
at Halloween
Oh! Oh!
How extravagant!


Oh Yam!
by Sophie E, age 9yrs

Oh! Yam!
Your skin feels like a bumpy book of bible verses
Your dark red colour looks like blood
Your silent way you lay there
makes me wonder
if you will ever move
(even with a hint of magic).
Are you best mashed? Boiled? Roasted?
I can’t wait to try!

Ode to a Cabbage
by Sophie H. age 10

Oh! Cabbage, your wrinkles in your skin
are like an old piece of scrunched paper.
You’re as soft as a moth
as crunchy as a cracker.
You’re as heavy as a brick
you’re as green as a bean.
Are you best cooked fried, baked, heated
or fresh from the bag?



Thursday, 3 November 2016

Poetry by Ava D

The Moon

The moon is a white polar bear
swimming in an icy sea,
porcelain bowl spinning,
wrinkly old man, aging.



Spider

shiny web swinging
black spider crawling
scared fly caught

by Ava D, age 8yrs



Wednesday, 1 April 2015

The Iain Sharp Poem

We talked about The Iain Sharp Poem. Iain Sharp is a poet who lives in Auckland and wrote a really cool poem based on himself. He gives a picture of himself through descriptions of things and actions.

We each wrote our own 'Iain Sharp' poem, using our own names and some of his framework. Here's what we came up with. (I have omitted the surnames).


The Gill Poem
I am a package carrying a dog.
I am a red chip that’s about to win Connect Four.
I am a UFO, spooking the minds of humans.
I am a thorn, forcing kids to wear shoes.
I am a sandy desert in Africa.
I am a dinosaur, wrecked by extinction.
I am a bad joke.
I am Gill.
  
The Ava Poem
I am a pass the parcel, waiting to be played.
I am a Barbie, staring at the patterned bed while my owner is playing with her friends.
I am a red Ferrari that has just been bought, all shiny and new.
I am a blossom tree and people are taking selfies with me.
I am a playground, I can see children playing on the monkey-bars.
I am an owl, eating my breakfast at night time.
I am Maria Kochetkova, waiting for my ballet class.
I am Ava.
  

The Mark Poem
I am a postcard with a stamp, making by brother jealous.
I am a trash pack, ready to trash my brother’s trash bin.
I am a Volkswagon, ready to drive to the airport.
I am a cacao tree, standing as straight as a zigzag.
I am a piwakawaka fleeting so high among the trees.
I am a human being, none of these are real.
I am Mark.
 
 
The Gabriella Poem.
I am a box, wrapped in red paper
          with a white bow
          on the way to 52 Different Street.
I am a dictionary waiting for misspelt words.
I am a black jet waiting to race around.
I am a wild flower, sad since I am left alone.
I am the beach; hot sand, cold water.
I am a monkey swinging from trees.
I am a human and that is me.
I am Gabriella.
 
The Mitchell Poem
I am a green postcard from Fiji.
I am a basketball getting dunked.
I am a truck, getting stuck up a hill. I am green.
I am a tree in the corner by Room 18, my leaves are dropping and they are green.
I am a lake in New Zealand, my water is green and slimy.
I am a cow mooing at my owners.
I am a bad cough in someone’s throat, pricking them.
I am Mitchell.

The Haoyu Poem
I am a letter wrapped in unicorn skin.
I am a flying netball.
I am a unicorn F22 shooting down UFOs.
I am a blade of grass in a farm, waiting to be eaten.
I am a volcano bursting with lava.
I am a unicorn.
I am Haoyu.

Tuesday, 17 March 2015

The Most Fabulous Me

We read My Most Fabulous Book by Leonie Young and used it as inspiration to write our own Fabulous Me stories. Here is a selection of some of our favourite lines from our Russley Writers' Club versions:

The most stars I've ever seen was when I went camping with my Dad and he broke the tent so we had to sleep under the stars. (Gabriella)

The most stars I've ever seen was on the catwalk at the talent show. (Mark)

The most stars I've ever seen was when I banged my head on a pole. (Haoyu)

The most exhausted I've ever been was when my team went swimming every day for two weeks. (Gabriella)

The most people I've ever seen was at the A&P Show. (Mitchell)

The most dishes I've ever seen was  on the side of the road where a homeless person was selling plates. (Mitchell)

The most dishes I've ever seen was at my auntie's wedding at Strawberry Fair. (Ava)

The most daring thing I've ever done was when I went to Auckland for Christmas and my cousin dared me to climb through the window and jump into the pool. (Quinton)

The most birds I've ever seen was at the walking forest in Victoria Park. (Ava)

The most water I've ever seen was when I broke the tap off the kitchen drinking fountain. (Haoyu)

The most trouble I ever got into was when I went to the West Coast with my Nana and she never knew I was there, hiding in the back seat of the car. (Gabriella)

The most trouble I ever got into was when I was hitting my brother in the car and my mum was at The Warehouse and someone complained and they called out the car plate number on the microphone and told my mum off. (Mark)