Showing posts with label Ben M. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Ben M. Show all posts

Saturday, 13 September 2014

Place Poems inspired by Paula Green's Poetry Workshops

Some of the fabulous writing inspired by Paula Green's poetry workshops:
Jordyn
Anthony




Pierre
Lily


Ben M


Thursday, 14 August 2014

Russley Writers featured in Christchurch Mail article

The Christchurch Mail has an article in today's issue featuring our wonderful Russley Writers. The article is about the Russley Writers' recent success in the 3rd Fabulous Poetry Competition. Congratulations to all our prize-winning poets.

Find poems here

Tuesday, 1 July 2014

Winning Writing from Years 5 to 8

As I mentioned in an earlier post, Russley School entered 'The Third Fabulous Poetry Competition' which was for a school entry of 25 poems. The competition was judged by Poetry Box's Paula Green, and the director of the NZ Book Council, Catriona Ferguson. Russley School was the winner of the South Island division!

As the winning school, we will receive a two day visit from Paula Green, who will run poetry workshops with Russley children in term 3.

Congratulations and huge thanks to all our poets. Scroll down to read some of the winning writing from our talented Russley authors!

Enjoy the poems from our senior students...




Winter has come again - by Ben M, Year 7

dark, murky skies
raining like a waterfall
deep puddles like mirrors
reflecting
soggy trees
crouching over


RAINDROPS - by Olivia C, year 7
splitter splatter
soggy gumboots
jump over cold puddles
I grip my clear umbrella
I hear splitter
                splatter
                    splitter
                       splatter
                           splash! 


Cutting Cold - by Ben T, year 7

The rain pelting down
like a boulder avalanche
people rushing indoors
shivering with cold
ice shards
even rain jackets do nothing

men and women driving
causing traffic jams
and accidents
in the rain

people indoors
covered in blankets
nearby a fire crackles

clothes turn soggy
soon smelly

everyone curled up
with hot chocolates
trying to forget
the freezing winter


SNOWFALL - by Riley H, year 7

My soggy clothes
were making my blanket wet.
I was rushing through the deep snow,
I even tried jumping through.
Everything I had was wet.
I finally got home
sat next to the fire
and had my hot chocolate.


The night frost - by Mitchell F, year 7

chilling cold
rain sounds like bullets
on my roof

drinking my hot chocolate
by the blazing fire
me and my family

snuggled in a blanket



WINTER - by Kaitlin C, year 7

soggy shoes
umbrella dripping
hurrying through
puddles

Splash!

the white sky
goes away
turning grey


JESSICA’S WINTER - by Jessica Y, age 7

soggy socks on the heater
drinking hot chocolate near the fire
snuggling into warm blankets
freezing winter air blows
                                  and blows

I grab my gumboots and jump
into the nearest puddle
                                  Splash!

hoping winter comes back again


The Painting - by Monica, year 7

a blank piece of paper
a polar bear in a snowstorm
a paintbrush paints...

a mountain looms over
the polar bear in a snowstorm
a paintbrush paints...

lush green grass
a mountain looms over
the polar bear in a snowstorm
a paintbrush paints...

a tree in the
lush green grass
a mountain looms over
the polar bear in a snowstorm
a paintbrush paints...


The winning entries from our Year 5 and 6 students:


I AM UNSTOPPABLE - by Quinton O, year 6

I am fantastic
I like cookies and cream milkshakes
I don’t like art

I’m afraid of spiders
I wish I could fly
I dream of going to Candyland

I pretend I’m listening to the teacher
I can eat twenty-one hotdogs at once
I am unstoppable

WET FEET
by Azryn C, year 6


my wet cold feet

flakes fall
as the sun comes up
drips drop down

the ferocious wind
will ease to a breeze

my wet cold feet


Winter Freeze
by Brayden D, year 5

My hands were freezing
like dripping ice.
I got wet and cold
like Jack Frost.
My family were playing
snowball fighting games.
I got Dad...
it hit him in the chest!
Ow!


WINTRY NIGHT - by Holly S, year 6

On a stormy, thundery,
wintry night
water trickles
onto the wet ground
the windy breeze blows
right through me.


Tuesday, 3 June 2014

The Curioseum

The Russley Writers' Club discovered a brilliant new book, The Curioseum, which is a collection of short stories and poems by New Zealand authors. The writers each chose an item from Te Papa museum and used it to inspire a story or a poem. You can listen to some of them read their work here: The Curioseum

Our Russley Writers took up the challenge to write their own creative piece of poetry or prose, inspired by a curious object. I took in an old pocket-watch, a book of poetry, a florin (coin) and a German dictionary which was given to my grandfather while he was in a Prisoner of War Camp during World War 2.

Here are the imaginative pieces from some of our writers...


Russley Writers' Curious Objects

Bang! Clatter!
I’m made.
1962 has a new florin in town

I’ve met up with my million relatives.
I’m thrown in a big sack.
The top opens
thousands of my relatives
start screaming.
As they go away from me
tears start to roll down
my surface.

As 46 years have passed
I’ve nearly been around every shop
but one
antique store.

I see a person walking in
through a small crack
in the cash register
He purchases a pound of butter
he hands over five dollars
the register opens
I’m handed over to the man.

He walks straight over the road
and into the antique store.
He looks at me and I look back
I’m put on the shelf
as an antique.

by Riley G

* * *

I AM THE GREAT OLD BOOK

I’m old
a great old book
I’m thin
the front of me is bent
I was published in Great Britain
my spine is getting wrecked
and turning light green
edges coloured with pinky purple
and cream

by Holly

* * *

I was born in 1962
in a factory
sent to the queen
then a boy

who happened to be skipping along
past a dairy
he handed me in
to a black container

Ding!

It was dark and cold
finally I was brought into the light
then put into a cosy
leather wallet.


by Quinton

* * *

THE COIN

Born 1962.
Queen Elizabeth the second on the side.
A kiwi on the other.

One florin
1962 New Zealand.

Which side is tails?
Which side is heads?

The bird is tails.
The head is the Queen.

The coin belongs to
New Zealand.
It has been to England.

The coin was once
glistening.

Now the coin is
very, very old
and drab.

by Brayden

* * *

The soldier’s watch

looks like a circle
the back is green
with silver sparkles

sounds like guns
banging very loud

feels sad in the heart
missing family

smells like gunpowder


by Mitchell

* * *


There once was a silver coin
born 1962
in New Zealand.
He was one in a million
a florin.
Every time it passed a new object
he would suck it in
to his picture
on the side.
The picture would come to life.

by Ben M

* * *

Understanding German

The old tattered spine
has string falling out.
Nowhere to go but on a book shelf. 
Should it be in a museum or
should it be in a house?
My prisoner of war number will
always will be remembered .

by Azryn 

Thursday, 8 May 2014

Autumn Poet's Walk

The Russley Writers' Club went on a ginko. A ginko is a walk with haiku writers, usually held at the start of a season or at a special time in a season. The poets usually walk in silence, taking in their surroundings, making notes of the words they collect along the way.

Here are some of the poems our writers created when we returned from our poet's walk. Olivia's acrostic poem was one of my favourites. As well as being a poet, Olivia is a talented netballer, and I loved the fact that she fitted netball perfectly into her Autumn poem! 


Autumn leaves flying down gracefully
Unpredictable leaves are falling
Turning different ways
Umbrellas have Autumn colours
More leaves to fall
Netballers have Autumn spirits
            flying around the court like fluttering leaves

by Olivia


The leafy smell of Autumn is here
The leaves crackling through the wind
They’re twirling, gliding, down to the ground
Smooth as a baby’s cheek
As I roll through the frosty leaves

By Riley H


Autumn is colourful and bright
Unique leaves
Trees are swaying
Uncontrolled leaves falling
Minty leaves spiralling to the ground
Nothing left on the trees

by Kaitlin


Autumn is bone chilling and damp
the leaves tear off the unfit branches
but out of all the chances
the rain pounds down
and drowns all the town
roads are abandoned
as people are stranded
raging rivers all around
are full of muck and cover the ground
the clouds are grey
and they box in the city
it’s soaked outside
which is such a pity

By Ben H


Autumn is mostly bleak
Unless it’s not cold wear a jacket
The wind howls like a thousand wolves
Unlimited leaves are dying
More leaves die
No leaves survive

By Ben T.


The frozen leaves falling
from fire breathing trees
crackling under my bare feet
flowing through the air like a lonely angel.
That’s autumn to me.

by Ben M