Showing posts with label Elise. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Elise. Show all posts

Tuesday, 29 November 2022

School Journal Author | Elise Makay!

Wow!  Congratulations to Elise Mackay whose writing, based on the the theme 'Kaitiakitanga', has been published in the November 2022 edition of the School Journal!

An incredible achievement to be published in the iconic journal alongside established adult writers, we are so proud of you Elise!







You can read the journal online at the link below:

https://instructionalseries.tki.org.nz/Instructional-Series/School-Journal/School-Journal-Level-3-November-2022

Thursday, 11 August 2022

Toitoi authors!

 Check out the latest issue of Toitoi, featuring the following Russley writers:

  • Blake Hurd | Dolphins
  • Bryn Devonald | Congratulations
  • Cooper Burgess | Fine Dining
  • Elise Mackay | Rollerskating
  • Porou Rongonui | The Worst Mistake of My Life
Grab a copy of Toitoi 28 to read their fabulous writing and soak up the glorious illustrations by students from schools all over Aotearoa.
















Monday, 23 May 2022

School Journal | Elise Mackay

The iconic School Journal is the world's longest running serial publication for children, with contributions from many well known New Zealand authors such as Margaret Mahy, Joy Cowley and Gavin Bishop. 


Elise Mackay's stunning poem on the theme of Kaitiakitanga titled 'Sumner Beach' has been selected to be published in the School Journal alongside established authors. This is an incredible achievement and we look forward to seeing Elise's work in print later this year.



Sunday, 15 May 2022

Congratulations!

Congratulations to the following students, who have had their creative writing selected for publication in the next issue of Toitoi.

  • Blake Hurd - poem titled Dolphins
  • Bryn Devonald - Medal poem
  • Cooper Burgess - flash fiction titled Fine Dining
  • Elise Mackay - flash fiction titled Roller Skating
  • Porou Rongonui - flash fiction titled The Worst Mistake of My Life

Their stories and poems were selected from a large number of submissions from all over NZ, and the standard was high as usual. To have work picked for publication is an outstanding achievment, so a massive congratulations to these authors.

If you didn't have your writing selected, please don't be too disappointed. Being a writer takes determination and perseverance (trust me, I know!) and I encourage you to keep trying. The editor of Toitoi said they would love to hear from you again. The deadline for Toitoi 29 is on July 7, 2022, so keep writing and RE-writing!

Thursday, 31 March 2022

Bird Poems published on Poetry Box

"What a flock of fabulous bird poems" - Paula Green


Toutouwai | South Island Robin
photo by Izak Koster

Some of our writers have been working on bird poems for Paula Green's latest challenge on Poetry Box.

Paula received hundreds of poems from students from all over Aotearoa New Zealand. She has published some of her favourite poems including those by Porou, Lachlan, Bryn, William and Elise.

You can read them on the Poetry Box blog HERE.

Paula has selected Porou to receive a book prize. Congratulations to all our poets!


The Tūī

black small feathers
ruffle against its body
short wide wings spread out ready to soar
black beak ready to feast

by Lachlan T, Year 5 Te Parito Kōwhai Russley School


The Kea

As cheeky as a 4-year old stealing a doughnut
the Kea is a very intelligent bird

Squawking and cawing
a trickster with flaming orange underwings
gliding across the mountaintops
hail shattering across the sky

Preening its wings with care
it can steal your lunch!

by Porou R, Year 4 Te Parito Kōwhai Russley School


Albatross

brave albatross flies
above the foggy dark forest

huge wings glide
through puffy clouds

yellow beak pecks
at fish like chopsticks

fast albatross dives
smelling its prey 12 miles away

by William H, age 9 Year 5Te Parito Kōwhai Russley School


Fantail

brown chest beating
swaying side to side
black white feathers fan out
chirps like cracking chips
white banded face brushes on fern

By Elise M Year 5 / Age 9 Te Parito Kōwhai Russley School


Ruru

Yellowish-green eyes
stare into nothingness

Dark brown
Huddling in the shadow

Shark hook
Piercing your food

Yellow feet
Stuck to the tree

Dark brown
Spotted white feathers

Creamy brown breast
Stands out in the darkness

The call of more-pork
Fills the forest

Hidden in a
bush

You sleep
I wake

by Bryn D, Year 7 Te Parito Kōwhai Russley School

Thursday, 1 July 2021

List Poems

 We have been experimenting with List Poems. We each picked a category - some chose a colour, some chose 'tiny things', some chose 'fast' or 'slow' things. 

We brainstormed to come up with a list of objects that fitted into that particular category. We then added some detail to each object. An adjective (describing word), a verb (action word), or perhaps a simile. 

I learn so much from my wonderful writers... they never cease to amaze me with their wealth of knowledge and experience, and their unique way of looking at the world. I love the way they weave these treasures into their writing.

This week I learnt that a John Deere 9R-540 tractor has a 13.6 litre engine and that the super giant star called Rigel is 860 light years from Earth! I absolutely love the simile from Desmond, comparing lines in a school exercise book to human veins. Brilliant!

Check out some of our list poems, hanging on the wall in the Writing Club Room:


Black:

a grippy tyre
a grippy tyre rolling

soft creased leather shoe
matariki night scaring me

smooth ink writing poems
my shadow copying

a cook racing car dashing
frizzy, long hair

by Antonio


Fast:

racing cars, smoking tyres
slender cheetah sprinting
Isuzu truck, roaring like a tiger
John Deere 9R 540's loud 13.6 litre engine
motorbike spinning its muddy wheels
blinking, winking, a pounding heart
speedy Sophie Pascoe
freestyling 200 metres

by Hayden


Slow...
newborn baby, wiggling tiny fingers
frustrating traffic jams in the city
soft shell turtle eating a goldfish
tiny snail slithering
difficult maths test in room 8
green and blue Earth rotates

by Gemma



Yellow:
buttered popcorn popping
sunflowers rising
like calm dancers
.
bees buzzing
hot fire sizzling
like loud lions roaring

by Daisy



Fast:

no traffic jams
cars racing
camouflaged cheetahs, black spots

strong wind
small leaves swishing
like waves

blinking people
beating heart
tough athletes sprinting
to the finish line

by Elise


Blue:

clear sky
oceans, smooth as plastic

Rigel, super giant,
860 light years from earth

straight lines in schoolbooks,
like veins

by Desmond