Monday, 16 December 2013

Scared of Shadows...

Snippets of creative writing by some of our Year 5 writers...

I’m scared of shadows – by Raevyn

I am scared of shadows. In the night you sometimes see shadows - even though they might be your family members. Shadows move really fast and then disappear... sometimes they come back. If I see a shadow out of my window I will get out of my bed and ask my mum if I can sleep with her.

Beach description – by Archie

They peered over and saw crystal blue water that looked like Antarctica had melted. The sea was colossal.

 

Never Push A Button... by Kyle

One sunny day I was walking down a stream, then suddenly I saw a big red button. When I pressed it a frantic T-Rex appeared and chased me into a cage with a lion. The lion chased me around and around in a circle until it ate me.

I was in the lion’s stomach for days until it pooped me out. I ran out of the poop and yelled, “Help me!”

Somebody came along and let me out while the lion was sleeping. I looked for the closest water and jumped in it.

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