Wednesday, 16 April 2014

Ode to My Feet



Instead of writing Cross Country Recounts (boring!) we celebrated the terminal part of our vertebrate legs on which we stand and each wrote an "ode to our feet!"

Here is Jordan's rather odorous ode:



Ode to My Feet

by Jordan

My feet are growing
Out of their shoes
So they have to go commando
When I wake up in the mornings
They stink like diesel
The fungus on the bottom
Stinks out the whole world
The cracked toe nails
Look like they will break apart  
at any time.


and more...

AN ODE TO FEET
By Roslind

If your feet are dirty
don’t you dear come near
or else you will see them
in deep despair.
I only like feet
when they are clean and neat
so wash them and scrub them
to make a joyful beat.
My feet… my feet
are colourful and neat
so don’t think I’m lame
because I’m not that vain.


AN ODE TO MY FEET
By Anthony

My feet are so old and wise,
like a dog
They can be used to count
in maths
and other stuff like that

They can take you lots of
different places
like up hills,
around town

My feet can even
peddle my bike
and they can walk me
all around, all day
whenever I want


I hate my feet
by Grace

Oh, how I hate my feet
they are just disgusting
and smell horrible

toes are weird as well
they are like little branches
growing off your feet
-        weird.

why do we have to have feet
this shape?
they are very strange…
ugly and unattractive.
-        Ewwwww!

So I hate feet.

1 comment:

  1. Golly gosh these poems gave me so many visual images of yucky, smelly and dirty feet. I think we may need to get a podiatrist into the school to help! What wonderful writing everyone! Mrs Fowler

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