Tuesday, 9 December 2014

Sizzling Hangi Poetry


The Hangi – by Elizabeth, age 7
the hangi flames were like Hades’ hair
it smelt like nothing I’d ever smelt before
because it was so good
it felt like warm roasting bones
and sounded like crashing stones

The Hangi – by Catherine D, age 8
Looks like a pit of black bubbles
Smells like Chinese takeaways
Sounds like the Grand Canyon’s rocks crunching
Feels like sponges
Tastes like McDonalds
 
 
Hangi Simile Poem – by Hunter, age 8
the steam flew away like paper
it smelt like mint leaves
on a skinny tree, sleeping in a meadow
it was white hot, cooking our food
 
 
Hangi – by Tom H, age 8
Flames as bright as a spotlight.
Smells like smoke.
Rocks grinding like hadrosaur teeth.
Flames boiling like overboiled soup.
Tastes like a birthday lunch!
 
 
Hangi – by AJ, age 8
Looks like gusty fog
children sound like chattering monkeys
hangi smells like raw chicken
feels like my sweat
tastes like Anzac biscuits.
 
 
Hangi – by Clara Sellier, age 8
flames rose as high as the roof
fire sounded like a hissing snake
children chatted like a herd of elephants
steam floated like a parachute
felt hotter than a hot water bottle
 
 
Hangi Simile Poem – by Oliver C, age 9
The hangi looked like a real kitchen but underground.
It smelt like walking into a takeaway shop, but better.
It sounded like someone cutting my hair.
The chicken felt as slimy as a squishy snail.
It tasted like the best thing in the world.
           
 
The Hangi – by Noah D
The coal was as black as a tuxedo.
The chicken drumsticks smelt like lovely lion meat.
The hangi sounded like a tigers roar.
It felt like boiling oil.
Flames boiling hot like dragon’s breath.
 
 
Hangi Simile Poem – by Ella S, age 9
Looks like steam
boiling hot as lava
smells like my grandad’s lamb shanks
looks like a spotlight wiggling around
feels like my first present I opened
tastes like pizza
yummy as chips
 
 
Hangi Simile Poem – by Chloe, age 8
Looks like a massive star
transformed into a different shape
It smells like burned fish’n’chips
It sounds like purring cats in the breeze
It feels like a hot summer’s day at the beach
It tastes like air set on fire
 

Hangi Simile Poem – by Riley, age 8
FLAMES as bright as the moon
SMELLS like Mum’s meatballs
CRUNCHES, like when you eat chips
TASTES like fish and chips – yummy!
FEELS Soooooo hot “Wow!”
 
 
Hangi – by Baylee L, age 9
Flames as hot as lava
in Granny’s Sunday roast.
Flames boiling hot like dragon’s breath.
Sounds like an emerald smashing on the ground.
Tastes like heavenly fish and chips.
 
 
Hangi – by Kelly, age 10
Looks like a steam train
sounds like popcorn popping
smells like cigarette smoke
I feel amazed that food can cook
like that
in the ground
and it only took four and a half hours
in a hole

Hangi – by Kara, age 9
looks like heat waves
sounds like flick, pop, crack
smells like a skunk that died
feels like a hot summer’s day


HANGI – by Quinton, age 10
Embers look like crystals in the sky
Sounds like popcorn popping
Smells like beautiful flowers
Feels like hot sand at the beach
Tastes as crispy as pizza crust

Hangi – by Brayden, age 10
looks like a steam train
smells like smoke from cigarettes
feels as hot as a dragon breathing fire
sounds like popcorn popping
and balloons

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