Our Awa Nui (am) Writing Group has been having fun with oral poetry. We decided on a topic, then each came up with a word or group of words. We stood in a line and each person said their piece, which when strung together formed a very cool poem. We then experimented by re-shuffling our positions, putting the words and "lines" in a different order. Here are a few of our pieces, about various locations in Canterbury.
https://youtu.be/ffxUciyLO3g
The Margaret Mahy Playground - by Finn, Robbie, Cooper, Kyla & Leah
bouncy trampolines
soft sandpit
fast flying fox
slippery slide
climbing to the top
slippery slide
climbing to the top
fast flying fox
soft sandpit
bouncy trampolines
climbing to the top
slippery slide
soft sandpit
bouncy trampolines
fast flying fox
Here's one about the Canterbury Museum:
Museum - by Finn, Robbie, Cooper, Kyla & Leah
creepy mummies
old rocks
hairy cavemen
strong snowplough
Taylor's Mistake by Finn D, Robbie & Cooper
lifeguard flags waving
pinchy crabs nibbling toes
cool-as surfers racing
down the waves
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